Writing Notes: Breathing

I have a chapter in which my main character visits a cave. And while the air composition is different from Earth’s air, it got me thinking whether he would see a white cloud condensing from his breath.

Hot breath increases the relative humidity of the cold outside air as they mix. Once humidity reaches 100%, it results in breath condensation.

It may seem like a tiny thing when you describe setting & character, but it can provide indirect information to the reader.

If you want to know whether your or your character’s breath will condense into a white cloud in certain locations, you can use this calculator.

Falaha’s Journey Free Kindle Download

This week (November 24 & 25) I’m offering the first volume (a complete novel, no cliffhanger) of my Falaha’s Journey serial from the OS Universe series as a FREE download on Amazon. More links below.

This baby!

A young girl with ambi­tion.
A des­per­ate man on a mis­sion.
An ancient enemy set to wipe out their entire race.

When a seem­ingly sim­ple space res­cue mis­sion turns into a night­mare, Falaha, a Danna Com­man­der Trainee with a power she can’t use prop­erly yet, has her skills put to the ulti­mate test as her world begins to col­lapse, throw­ing her to the cen­ter of the con­flict that might wipe out her entire race.

The Danna are a species of humanoid aliens who share the Milky Way with human­ity. Unlike humans, they have been around for at least three bil­lion years and are the old­est species in the Galaxy. Born with an alien arti­fact in their blood, they pos­sess abil­i­ties sur­pass­ing any­thing any liv­ing crea­ture can dream of. How­ever, both their superb space tech­nol­ogy and their unusual blood legacy have attracted dan­ger no one expected. Aban­don­ing their home Galaxy, the remain­ing pop­u­la­tion sets out in secrecy to their last resort, Kan Diona, the place to wit­ness their vic­tory or to become their grave.

FALAHA’S JOURNEY is a vivid tale of alien species, races, and cul­tures, a fam­ily saga span­ning mul­ti­ple gen­er­a­tions and extend­ing across the Uni­verse, a tale of iden­tity, explo­ration, and self-discovery amidst a dev­as­tat­ing strug­gle for sur­vival, and a love story that touches the stars.

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Of Plots and Pants

I write my novels in bursts. Writing N words every day is a mantra that doesn’t work for me. I must visualize the whole chapter at once (or at least get an aha! moment for a certain scene) before I can write even a single sentence of it. That requires days of brewing the story in my head. Sometimes those chapters get written in several steps or parts depending on their size. A 2k chapter is usually done in one go in a single day or two. A 5k chapter can take a week or two, because I return to it over and over and add stuff (some research required). Things happen to get added a month later.

I have finished the first part of my WIP (12 chapter totaling in 31k) and I can say that outlining doesn’t work for this story either. Sure, I wrote quite a detailed outline for the whole thing (100k planned) and after slowly going through the first 12 chapter I can safely say that this outline is for some other novel I’m not currently writing. So I scrapped it and now I’m just going forward with a vague idea of the outcome of the whole thing. Which makes it more interesting to work on — I get surprised, I let the characters freely drive the plot and the inner logic of the world starts to dictate things well. At this point I don’t know what an ending scene would look like (I don’t even know what the next two parts will be like), I just want to get there organically. But I do know that there will be an epilogue with a scene from the far future, I just have to pick the right place in time for it; I have several candidates for that one, none of which make any thematic sense now, since I don’t know the first ending yet.

I admit that I’m moving at a snail’s pace here, but this story requires slow development. I’ll probably consume a whole crate of red wine to celebrate after I’m done with it. 😀

What are your writing habits and methods? How do you get the job done?

A 8000-year-old raised bog of Ķemeri

I haven’t been doing a lot of traveling lately, but occasionally I go on small road trips across my country. There are plenty of things to see and today I made my way to a special place for a walk. I had luck with the weather, though it was rather windy.

There’s a ~3.7 km long footbridge through a small part of the mossy great bog landscape, twisting between small pines and tricky pools of clear but deep water. Unfortunately I haven’t encountered any local fauna save for a lonely duck asking for some bread from occasional tourists, though the bog is famous for its assortment of birds and plants, and only on my way back I managed to see a massive flock of wild geese or something from afar.

The marsh is not far from the sea shore (if driving), so that’s a bonus.

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