New Beginnings, Old Things Revived

Perseverance, the third book of the Falaha’s Journey trilogy, passed its first stage of revisions, adding another 1500-something words in the process. A few more reads and it will be going to the editor at the end of next week. Which is a good thing.

Now, what comes next, one might ask.

Many things. I’ve neglected my world building practices for more than a year. Last month I managed to get my hands on on a few extra workstations (old machines, but good enough to play with), so I’m finally getting down to business of that atmosphere/ocean model for my fictional planet.

While that one is calculated, I’ll have to tighten my cultural setting too and add flesh to the characters. I did a fair share of work to introduce my main culture in the trilogy, but this time I’m heading deeper in time: the story of their world I initially set out to write. Didn’t happen back then and for a better good. I’m happy I wrote Falaha first, because her story made me figure out that the novel, Rjg, was starting out with the wrong main character. That old story belonged to someone else and for that reason refused being written.

Rjg is the story of Yaren.

A story nearly three billion years old, set in an ancient world long before its culture spread out to the stars of the Milky Way and beyond. (The answer to your questions regarding the timespan is in Falaha’s story.)

Genre? This is science fiction, not fantasy. An alien historical novel, if you may. 😉

Where’s the science, you ask? I’m having atmosphere/ocean model not just for a decor.

It’s going to be a big novel, 250k+ words, told in four or five three parts. I haven’t decided on a POV yet, but possibly First Person or Third Person Limited.

So, yeah, sex, blood, and rock-n-roll, baby!

If not too lazy and in good health, I will be updating the blog on this project a lot. Along with some articles on worldbuilding, of course.

Queen of the Mountain

The Journey is finally over. It took me two and a half years to complete the story and today (yesterday, actually, but I had some fixes today) I finished the draft of the third book.

I will be revising and polishing it later, at the end of April, so I can begin the edits on May 15th. Perseverance, Book 3 of Falaha’s Journey, will be scheduled for release in June 2014.

Damn it! I’m publishing in summer again! Third time in a row. :-/

I still need the idea of the completed project to sink in, so I’m not ready to think of what comes next. All I know the next book will be stand-alone, and something completely different from what I had initially planned.

I’m still in process of figuring out the description for book 3. Short summaries are my personal hell. That minor unsolved issue aside, this is how I feel today:

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B is for Beta-Readers

At some point in our writing lives comes a time when we need another set of eyes to look at our masterpiece. Your draft is done, your first revisions are done, time to look for a beta. Of course, there’s no such thing as the ideal beta reader, but you have to have an idea of what you are looking for.

Finding the right people is hard work. It takes time, patience, and trials. If you’ve set your eyes on a writer pal, there’s no guarantee that a writer would be a good critique partner, and the quality of reads you may get is a hit or miss.

Personally, I prefer having betas who are not writers (writer-writer pairing can easily turn into slapfest, especially if the writers are at the early stage of their writing careers, so you have to articulate in detail every point you need/want from their read.) Avid readers who are not writers have good eyes, so they will tell what worked and what not — it is subjective of course, everyone has their set of preferences, but if several betas point you at the same problem with the story, then you better take that into consideration.

These are some good resources on finding your beta readers:

What Should We Look for in a Beta Reader?
Ask Jami: How Do We Find Beta Readers?
Ask Jami: Where to Find Beta Readers

Beta Readers – What’s your experience?

Beta Reader Job Description

If you are an author in need of a beta-reader, you may want to try one of these places:

On Goodreads:
Beta/Proof Readers
Beta Reader Group
First Readers (Beta Readers)
The Circle: for readers/beta readers/critiques/reviews/free reads

On Facebook:
Beta Reader Writers Club

WordlLitCafe:
Beta Readers & Critique Groups

Of course, there are a lot more places where you can find your betas — writing/reading forums and discussion boards may well be on your list. Writing social networks such as Authonomy, Wattpad or Worthy of Publishing can also be of use.

What is your experience with beta-readers? Where do you look for betas?

When a Story Refuses to be Finished (The Way I Thought It Would, Naturally)

No, this post is not about unfinished stories. I finish all of my projects because I’m obsessive-compulsive about loose ends in everything. I like things done. I like have written.

Somewhere last December I set aside all other projects, illustrations, worldbuilding ‘toys’, even more frequent blogging, and pushed forward to write the third book. It went smooth, though I did not write every day—I still don’t, and I need almost a week of chilling out between each chapter. This March the end was already in sight: I finally entered the Climax Zone. The Big Battle awaited, blah, blah, blah, etc., etc.

And then, it happened.

In the last few days I’ve discovered that the Climax Zone in this story had its own spatial geometry: like some parts of the previous books it was a tale of its own, so it had to be handled in a non-linear fashion or warped in some other unusual way.

Done!

I decided on a solution which both eased and complicated things. (Duh, I just love and hate this kind of duality.)

Marked in RED: The story region that is undergoing sudden inflation!
Marked in RED: The story region that is undergoing sudden inflation!

So, why this is an issue? This step will make the whole book bigger (hence I would have to save more cash for professional edits) and I may have to abandon the previous structure I had planned for it. Also, the deadline that I had set for myself—to release it mid-2014, may not hold. I hate editing in summer and this one was promised to be the hottest summer in the past 140 years, so I’m setting my sights for autumn. Just in case.